Hello everyone,

We’re beginning 2018 with a real treat.  Our first feature poets are Jacob and Liam Palmer.  Here’s a wee bit about these creative chaps and three of their imaginative poems.

Hi, my name is Jacob and I am ten years old. My favourite food is Chinese dumplings and my favourite sport is soccer.  I also like to read Harry potter books.  I enjoyed writing these poems…

Jacob Haiku

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Nice work Jacob!  Your first poem is really interesting and your second poem has a nice structure. You have used repetition well.


Now, let’s meet Liam!

Hi, my name is Liam. I am 7 years old.  My favourite food is sushi.  My favourite sport is dodgeball and I have a cat called Willow.

Australian boys

Liam, your poem is outstanding!  It’s memorable and dances around in the reader’s head like a catchy tune.

What an imaginative family!  We hope to see more from Jacob and Liam in the future.

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One thought on “

  1. Nan and Pop
    have no need to shop
    for books or toys
    because they have two little boys
    who entertain and enthrall them
    with their poems and lines
    that make them so proud
    that they have to read them out loud
    to anyone about and around.

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